Mid Production Interviews

Having gotten to a point in editing where I have put all my shots together according to the storyboard and edited them all, I have found it difficult to find exactly what I can change to improve my music video.
Therefore, I brought in some of my teachers (who the age of my target audience) to watch my video which I followed by asking them questions about it.
I was pleased to find that the story or themes of the story came across clearly in the video and the audience were able to identify them.
The criticisms given to me will be very helpful as I can now change the aspects of the video that my audience did not enjoy as much, such as the extensive shots of my female actress sitting on the couch. However, there are some aspects I will not be able to change such as the issues with my male actor. His poor acting on the day has affected the mood of my music video, but I hope that I can find a way to manipulate the video to make this less obvious.